11 Creative Secrets for Compelling Direct Response Headlines

compelling headlinesOur regular readers appreciate that we have a positive bias toward healthcare marketing and advertising that produces measurable, near-term results. Direct Response Marketing isn’t the only option, but for hospitals and medical practices—facing tough competition with a lean, cost-effective budget—it offers advantages over brand-based methods.

Experienced writers will devote half (or more) of their creative energy in producing a powerful and effective headline. After all, if the headline doesn’t grab the reader’s attention, and give them a reason to read the ad…well, no reader, no ad, no results.

Academic courses stress the importance of these first words. Tutorials such as American Writers & Artists, provide a “Four U” formula. Strong headlines, they teach, should be:

  • USEFUL to the reader
  • Create a sense of URGENCY
  • Present a UNIQUE benefit
  • Communicate these in an ULTRA-SPECIFIC way

As further help, here are additional tips that creative professionals keep up their sleeve when writing (and rigorously re-writing) headlines for direct response material.

  • Highlight the benefit(s) to the audience
  • Arouse curiosity; ask a question
  • Ask an intriguing question
  • Begin with how to
  • Call out to a specific target audience
  • Evoke emotions
  • Frame ideas as special or exclusive
  • Numbers command attention and authority
  • Provide a forceful and persuasive promise
  • Say something counter intuitive or controversial
  • Use startling specifics

Headlines are the attention-getting gateway for your benefit-laden idea. It is an especially critical element in direct response materials, but these tips are also useful for blog posts, social media touch points, outdoor advertising and longer-form content.

Unfortunately, compelling headlines are often pulled off course by well-intended stabs at “cute” or “clever” misdirection. If your creative endeavor could benefit from experienced, professional guidance, checkout the additional articles below, or connect with us today.

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Stewart Gandolf, MBA


Stewart Gandolf

Stewart Gandolf

Chief Executive Officer and Co-Founder at Healthcare Success
Stewart Gandolf, MBA, is CEO of Healthcare Success, a medical marketing and health care advertising agency. He is also a frequent writer and speaker. Most importantly, he is happily married and a "rock-n-roll daddy" to two wonderful girls.
Stewart Gandolf
Stewart Gandolf



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